you and I.
You wrote "One day I and you will get there." But it's suppose to say "One day YOU AND I will get there." Gosh, learn how to grammar, people; It's not that hard. This is whats wrong with society today, people just don't care about anything anymore. What's happening to us? When I look around me all I see is filth.
oh and the song... it's guess it's alright, whatever. 5/5